In some countries, an increasing number of people have health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore essential for governments to increase a tax on fast food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Living in the contemporary day and age,

face-paced

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lifestyle plays an important role in people’s lives.

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is due to the fact that there

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various fast foods that can be bought affordably and effortlessly.

However

,

this

course of action affects many aspects and inevitably

contribute

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to several health issues

such

as malnutrition.

Thus

, it is generally held that the only solution is that the governments should higher a tax on fast

food's

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food

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expenditure

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.

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essay partially agrees with the aforementioned statement and provides a set of reasons to support each point of view before the conclusion is reached.

First

and foremost, it is without a doubt that rising

this

food area’s tax can effectively solve the problem of

unhealthy

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lifestyle

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. To be more explicit,

this

measure will force the residents dwelling in society to gradually decrease their purchases

in

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fast

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a fast

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snack

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in order to save

their

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money. A concrete example can be found in an increasing excise on alcohol which successfully resulted in its lower consumption.

On the contrary

, there exists numerous negative consequences derive

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form

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this

method.

First

of all,

this

solution inevitably undermines

individual's

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freedom. To justify

this

notion,

every

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people from all walks of life must have

their

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right to choose their lifestyle's choice whether they want to consume junk foods or

nourished

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foods.

Moreover

, it does more harm than good when it comes to impoverished people’s perspective since their expenses are greater than usual. To summarize, despite the fact that increasing additional tax on fast cuisine can significantly handle health problems in

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society, several drawbacks come alongside namely, restriction of freedom or increase in

financial

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burden to the poor. Different people have

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mindset

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which

are

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all valid in their own judgement, no matter what the reasons are, it is indispensable to acquire healthy

behavior

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.