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Technology has enabled the mass production of goods with the use of machines. Discuss the merits and demerits of mechanized production.

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Since the industrial revolution happened in England 200years ago . Many industries have adopted mechanized
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. Sectors like manufacturing have seen a sea change in the adoption of mechanized
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 .some Industries have gone far ahead and adopted robotics-based
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 the use of mechanized
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 has its advantage and disadvantage. Lets us discuss both views .
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 save the cost of training humans , It reduces defects in the quality of products manufactured. It
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 enables Manufacturers to cut down waste in
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 . Most manufacturers prefer mechanized
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 because of these factors.
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 , there are a lot of other disadvantages too like the Unemployment of both skilled and unskilled workers .
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 require huge maintenance because of that electricity and power consumption of these companies will be higher always.
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 can not be reduced in
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 kind of working setup. ,
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 mechanized cost of
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 will be always high and depend upon the smooth supply of power and other raw materials. That always Increases the final cost of
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 . There will always be pressure on
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 which results in fewer margins for manufacturers . Mechanized
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 will always require huge maintenance . To sum it up , Mechanized
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 will always have repercussions for Humans . Keeping in mind that technological advancement is happening these days . It's necessary to study the far-reaching consequences of mechanized
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 so that it won't create problems like unemployment , or the burning up of resources like power and other natural resources . So it is safer to conclude mechanized
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 has more disadvantages than advantages.
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