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important differences between the idea of earning money from professional sports in contrast people in other major professions

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important differences between the idea of earning
money
 from professional sports
in contrast
people
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to people
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 in other major
professions
, where
although
 some
people
 think
this
 is fully justified, others think it is unfair. There are who argue that exit several reasons for the difference
of
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in
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 earning
money
 working as a professional sports and other important
professions
 workers, but it depends on the specifics viewpoints.
For instance
, in a variety of
sports
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 there are a wide number of companies that support
this earnings
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these earnings
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by
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through
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 particular interests
as
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such as
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 sponsorships, investments, publicity, between a lot
of
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apply
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more aspects that generate
a
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a bog amount
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bog
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big
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 amounts of
money
.
This
 could be considered other world fully different from to
professions
 in the normal population. On the one hand is the entertainment world, one of the most recognized
business
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businesses
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, and all the
people
 pay for it, and it can add a lot of
money
 day by day.
On the other hand
,
this
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in this
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 kind of professional
sport
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people
have
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has
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 a short time to develop
its
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their
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 activities, because the physical performance in any
sport
 is highly
demandant
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. It before explained due that the range of age to execute any
sport
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sports
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 activity could be less than ten years, and the level of demand is
quite
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quiet
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. In
others
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other
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professions
, even very important, its execution is through decades and can be more stable in earning terms, whereas if the
people
 want to earn more
money
, they have to study more as can be specialization and masters or similar
,
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 or gain
mor
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more
 experience through the time, it could help with certainty. One of the ways to earn more
money
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by
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having a common profession could be
create
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to create
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 your own business, it can improve the level of profits
in
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for
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 each person. Taking everything into consideration, there are
a
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apply
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significant differences between both
level
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levels
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 of
incomes
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income
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 either for the
develop
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development
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 of normal activities in society or
sport
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sports
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 doings.
Nevertheless
, in my
opinion
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 the balance of earning
money
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is
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ins
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is
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 extremely high and it is a little bit unfair, taking
in to
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into
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 account the biggest needs in the society
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