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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers

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Dear Mr Simsons, My name is Turner, the only male in your class, I am writing
this
 letter to apologize that I could continue the course. It is a hard time for me now.
First
 of all, I really appreciate it if you let me join
into
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your class
as
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for
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my
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second
 time. Unfortunately, my schedule is obviously messed up so I must drop
off
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some of the courses off my table. My schedule does not have any room for my favourite course
this
 year. I am really disappointed.
Secondly
, I just heard that my
next
 year's schedule will have more room for any courses. So I can not wait for
next
 year to put your course on my list again. Hope to see you again. Your's Faithfully Turner
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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