You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers

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Dear Mr Simsons, My name is Turner, the only male in your class, I am writing

this

letter to apologize that I could continue the course. It is a hard time for me now.

First

of all, I really appreciate it if you let me join

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your class

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for

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second

time. Unfortunately, my schedule is obviously messed up so I must drop

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some of the courses off my table. My schedule does not have any room for my favourite course

this

year. I am really disappointed.

Secondly

, I just heard that my

year's schedule will have more room for any courses. So I can not wait for

year to put your course on my list again. Hope to see you again. Your's Faithfully Turner

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

129 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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The animal species are becoming extint due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reason and solution ?