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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In today's world of sophisticated technology, it is not
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 expectation that in the future many people can possess
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 to high-tech devices. According to some, societies move towards using online types of reading materials as well as never do they purchase paper ones. In the following, by mentioning some reasons I tend to discuss that I generally agree with those.
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 and foremost, some say that the future of reading tasks takes place among communities by means of their technological gadgets which provide them with online forms of
books
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 and magazines. One of the most significant reasons why individuals intend to use these online platforms is because of easy accessibility to a wide range of
books
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 whenever they want as well as getting up-to-date news faster than ever before when they must buy some printed newspapers.
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, the improvement which is arisen in the design of these devices benefits communities with
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 memories that bring them an opportunity to maintain many more
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.
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, if
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 capability does not exist, families will not afford a large number of
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 and newspapers. Another important reason is that, in today's world, people are seeking some ways to decrease the use of paper in order that they witness the reduction of cutting down trees.
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, the more trees are fallen down, the more
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 are produced.
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, if societies utilize the online forms of
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, their surrounding environment will be less likely to be polluted. In conclusion of what aforementioned, as far some causes the pros of reading
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 and newspapers online
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 to them and assisting to retain the quality of nature outweigh their cons.
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, my take is on the side of
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 online phenomenon eventually.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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