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You were recently impressed by a staff member at a store. Write a letter describing your appreciation. In your letter include: ● What the situation was ● How you were helped ● What you are going to do as a result of this good experience

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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 letter to say thanks to your employee Mr Justin for his work
last
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 week. I would like to tell you that I came there with my husband for shopping. We were looking for Indian food but it was difficult to find it.
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, We bought a dining table which was heavy and difficult to lift.
Firstly
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, Justin came to us and ask if we need any help.
Then
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 we told them about food which he found so quickly. We were impressed by his service because he was working at the front counter and he came from there to find a thing.
Moreover
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, after we paid the bill it is difficult to move the cart because of the table.
Then
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 he lifts a table for us and fixes it in our truck. My husband liked his customer service. We were happy for his help and I gave him a tip to his appreciation.I would like to give him a five-star rating on google reviews. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, John Smith
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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