The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Increasingly, the number of people working from
home
has grown in some countries, and it was boosted during the pandemic time along. Certain people support Use synonyms
this
idea, but others don't. There are some advantages and disadvantages, and I'm going to bring up Linking Words
it
following Correct pronoun usage
them
this
essay.
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Firstly
, a specialist in the environment brought many pieces of information about the goodness of the environment after Linking Words
this
behaviour Linking Words
behaviour
changed in some countries. As result, cities Remove the redundancy
apply
such
as Sao Paulo, New York and Toronto reduced around 40% of air pollution by decreasing the number of fuel emissions by car, and public transport. In fact, these attitudes transformed the lifestyle and everyone won with it, including the air.
Linking Words
Secondly
, a doctor specialist in mental issues exposed some benefits for those who work from Linking Words
home
, Use synonyms
however
, he described thousand of disadvantages. In fact, working from Linking Words
home
can bring up some bad situations, either in the case of those workers who have Use synonyms
a
noisy Correct article usage
apply
places
to develop their jobs. Correct the article-noun agreement
place
For example
, My wife spent around two years working from Linking Words
home
since the pandemic started, unfortunately, for her was disturbing, and she resigned as soon as she could.
In conclusion, working from Use synonyms
home
could be beneficial for society, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
there are a few parts of them that should be Add a comma
,however
Correct your spelling
analysed in
analyzed in
analysed
analysedin
a real situation before taking a decision of working from Correct your spelling
analysed in
home
. It style of job can be stressful and show up some mental diseases for employees, and still cause trouble to member family.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite