During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter Remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear sir, I am writing you

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letter to remind you about the job offer that you told me about

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week. I am Reham and I met you during my visit to Dubai on the morning flight from Dubai to Egypt with the number: 3243244. I was sitting

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to you and we had an interesting conversation about work and you gave me your business card

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so that I will able to contact you later about your occupancy offer in your restaurant. According to our talking, I want to disclose some data about me which make me appropriate for the financials manager position.

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, I graduated from the Business faculty with excellent grades, and since my graduation, I have been working in an international company called Chevron. After a little time, I have been promoted to a higher position because of my achievement in improving the financial department. To illustrate

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point, during my work I had taken a diploma in SAP program and I implement a new manner in work and

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led to numerous profits in no time.

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, I believe that, if I will be given the opportunity to manage the financial department in the new branch of your restaurant, I will perform an incredible effort, and we will gain a lot of revenue while cooperating with you. I am looking forward to hearing back from you, Yours Sincerely, Reham

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

234 words

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