It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days
life
getting more and more difficult and
people
who need to improve most face some
risks
to have a perfect opportunity in either professional
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privet
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private
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lives
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. In my perspective ,the benefits of taking
risks
more
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are more
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than the drawbacks , in
this
essay I will explain both sides and draw up my own conclusion .
Initially
, in terms of the main benefits for
people
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,people
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how
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who
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to
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have the courage to
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risks
, that might opens for them many doors in their professional and personal lives .
Firstly
,
individual
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individuals
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who face risk in their daily
life
have more chance
to
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being
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rich than
who
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those who
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avoiding
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risks
and scar to try
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something
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somethings
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something
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new . One example to prove
this
, the majority of
people
who became rich faced many situations and
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thy
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they
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filled many time and tried to take
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risks
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every chance in their
life
such
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as
,
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Adam Smith,
he
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apply
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became a businessman after he abandon
house
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his house
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and all of his budget to start a new business and now he is one of the
most
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richest
man
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men
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in the world .
Secondly
, taking
risks
these days might give us knowledge and experience we might never have
if
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we stayed in the same comfort zone .
This
is because
people
who faced risk had more patients and
they
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capable
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were capable
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to start again if they failed.
For example
, individuals who lost money when they tried to create their own
business
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businesses
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they know now their weaknesses and what
are
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capable of .
On the other hand
,despite the advantages of having
risks
, taking
risks
sometimes are difficult for
people
who have families.
For instance
, a majority of parents now trying to get more money for their children to give them a comfortable
life
and good
educations
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education
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,
therefore
they might
takes
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take
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risks
and put all
what
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they have in the same profit in investments when they are not sure about the investments and eventually they might
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everything they have . In
conclusions
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conclusion
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, taking
risks
have
positives
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positive
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points for some
people
and
also
drawbacks for a minority of
people
.
Therefore
I believe taking
risks
every once in a while could be
best
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the best
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experience ever .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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