Write about the following topic. Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the contemporary world,
people
are working like machines and they don’t have enough time
to separate for leisure activities
. Out of the world's ,population a limited amount of people
have time
for hobbies
. There are many reasons for this
situation and due to this
people
as well as individuals face numerous effects. This
essay will highlight the causes and the effect of why people
neglect hobbies
.
In the early years, our ancestors had different pastime activities
to live their life
to the fullest, for an instance, collecting stamps was an amateur interest ,however
, today this
trend has declined and people
no longer have hobbies
. The most prominent reason for this
is, humans are working towards money, and since the market price is rising rapidly people
have to compete with these prices. Due to this
society have no spare time
to participate in leisure activities
, however
another reason is thatAdd a comma
,however
,
humans are addicted to social media applications, and they have made Facebook, Remove the comma
apply
Instagram
their Correct word choice
and Instagram
hobbies
. For example, today school children
don’t participate in sports activities
, just after coming home they log in to their social media apps to play a game or search for gossip.
On the other hand
, as a consequence of neglecting hobbies
, especially children
are facing numerous challenges in their life
, such
as half of the world is having high obesity rates and diabetes. ,Eventually
humans are falling apart from their health and they don’t enjoy their Add a comma
,Eventually
life
like in the past, due to this
society as a whole is having depression which is a serious life
-threatening situation nowadays. For an
example, according to research half of Australian Correct article usage
apply
children
are facing depression and those groups of children
are not participating in any activities
.
In conclusion, I would like to mention that, we should continue what our parents taught us, so we will not face serious issues in the future. Hobbies
are invented by people
because it leads spare time
for us to enjoy our life
even if we are having busy schedules.Submitted by wathsala.lekamge1997 on
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