A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is John I live in the area near your sports

club

. I just heard about the sad news regarding your

club

closing down, which is why I am writing

this

letter to make some suggestions.

First

of all, I want to thank you and your team for running the sports

club

in our area for the

last

few years,

although

there are some difficulties at the beginning. Our community started to do exercises because of your

club

activities and very reasonable membership fees.

Besides

, I would like to make some suggestions for your consideration in order to keep the sports

club

as it is. I heard your

club

is closing down because the rental fees of your current building go up by two times and the car park is very small. There's good news for you since there's an old building with big open space,

that is

just 1 km from your current location, which is available to let from

month.

Moreover

, that open space is not only big enough for the car park but

also

for other outdoor activities,

such

as jumping, cycling, volleyball, and football. I can introduce the property agent to you if you are interested. I hope you will reconsider closing the

club

and remain in our area for a much longer time unless there are no other choices. I would like to send my regards to you and your team for your kindness towards our community. Yours faithfully, John

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