letter to friend who accepted to take care of your house in your absence informing him of important things to take care

To Franks, Hello mate, how are you ? I just have news from your mother that you have a cold. I am hoping that you will get better soon. Anyways, I am thankful and secure that you are willing to take care of my house while I am travelling to my wife's hometown. I am so surprised that you are free at that period. I will get back to my house on 12 November and maybe be there at about 9 AM. Is it possible ? that you are able to be free at that time in order to take a key for me
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Because I think I lost my other key, when, I was getting on the train.
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, please do not forget to water my plants and feed my dogs every evening after you have done your activities. Hope to see you soon, keep that door locked all the time. Yours regard, Turner, Your best friend
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • safeguard
  • secure
  • precious belongings
  • alarm system
  • lock all doors and windows
  • check for leaking pipes
  • regularly water the plants
  • pay utility bills
  • power outage
  • plumber
  • electrical issues
  • fire extinguisher
  • emergency contact numbers
  • neighborhood watch
  • peace of mind
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