You are living overseas and have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. Explaining what the incorrect information is say how the editor could change it Suggest another topic about your country that they could write about
Dear Sir,
I write in reference to an article about
Pakistan
in the section of International News, published on 22nd December, in your newspaper "The Daily". You mentioned that the National Language of Pakistan
is English
and most of the people speak English
as their native tongue. Being a Pakistani, I can assure you that English
is not spoken as a native language, however
, it's more of an official language.
I would be most grateful if you could possibly rewrite an article about this
and clear the misconception. Furthermore
, you can also
mention that Urdu is Pakistan
's national dialect, but English
is also
spoken and understood by many.
I would appreciate it if you could write about cultural diversity in Pakistan
. In addition
, how all of its four provinces vary in lifestyles and traditions. If you need any further
information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours faithfully,
LisaSubmitted by anniezafar3 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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