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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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such
 sensitive subjects as a lack of funds and the jobs that we might dislike. One opinion suggests that the best we can do is to embrace what life has given us, while the other claims that it is always worth trying to change for the better.
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 it is hard to leave out either view, I would always go for the latter based on a belief that one must pursue the ultimate goal of being happy and fulfilled in their life and transcend
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bad outcomes. But as they say, all shall pass, and so does the bad. If you want it, you can do it.
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 the best, whatever we deal with. It can be the job we dislike or the lack of money, which is common and obviously not the worst that can happen to us. The world has become very dynamic, we can change our lives with a proportional effort applied depending
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 people tend to regret
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the things they haven't done rather than
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what they have. Another good quote to sum it up would be that the water doesn’t float under the laying stone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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