Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a tendency, nowadays, that a noticeable part of
individuals
do
not have Change the verb form
does
hobbies
at all. As a result
of such
passive involvement in hobbies
, people
start losing their own identity and begin more boring
as Replace the word
bored
individuals
. In my opinion, devoting time
to hobbies
is an essential part of people
's life; therefore
, a lack
of such
individuals
with hobbies
will lead to a lack
of creative people
in society in general.
Since we live in the era of the internet, people
around the world have more opportunities for any sort of content they want. Consequently
, these individuals
spend a
majority of their free Correct article usage
the
time
online: searching for something or chatting with their online friends on social media. As the
result of constantly being on the internet, Correct article usage
a
such
members of society usually end up having no free time
for hobbies
. Thus
, in my personal view, will negatively affect such
individuals
because our hobbies
are one of the few things that build our personality. According to the latest scientific researches
, spending a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
research
time
online could lead to mental health problems due to lack
of motivation to do extra activities like Correct article usage
a lack
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a hobby
hobby
.
Another reason Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
of
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for
this
effect is poor conditions for having hobbies
. For instance
, a lot of people
like to do sport
as their hobby
, but they give up early because of insufficient sport
equipment or Change the noun form
sports
sport
places provided by Change the noun form
sports
government
. If Add an article
the government
government
of any country in the world provides good Add an article
the government
sport
places and free sufficient Fix the agreement mistake
sports
equipments
for doing Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
this
sport
, member
of the public will enjoy doing Fix the agreement mistake
members
sport
as the
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a
hobby
. Even though I was passion
about football, I found it very problematic to continue playing football in my home town because of Replace the word
passionate
bad
quality of the football field and Correct article usage
the bad
bad
quality of our team Correct article usage
the bad
sport
clothes, which were necessary to wear during games.
In conclusion, I would say that there are two big reasons Fix the agreement mistake
sports
of
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for
lack
of Correct article usage
the lack
hobby
for some Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
people
, the first
is the
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apply
over
spending Change preposition
apply
time
online, and the second
is a
government, which does not reinforce Correct article usage
the
their
public to do Change the word
the
hobbies
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