People argue that Companies and private indivduals rather than goverments should pay to clean up the pollution that they produced. To what extend do you agree or disagre

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modern
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industrial
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has become highly Controversial. There are those who
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government
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for
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will give Some arguments in favour of my opinion. Genically Speaking, there are
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variety
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of Chemical
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. If they properly clean their
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do not
have to get Chance to polluted our environment.
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their chemical waste. For examples. In our Country in
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Corporation
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it is effective for all of the world.
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wastage
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any rules and
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.
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,they through their
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here and there. For these reasons,increasing
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pollution
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, it must be said there are several
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against authority.
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goverment
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government
governments
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firms
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should follow the rulers.
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organizations
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should pay the cleaning fee. If they do not agree to pay the cleaning fee they
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be punished..
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government should cancel their
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a result
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will
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rules.not
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to create policy but
also
need to do many awareness
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programme
programmes
for
people
and all others.
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In conclusion
,cleaning
indudustrial
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industrial
and
people
wastage
is a topic which is very relevant to
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modern
society.if
,
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the government
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take
takes
proper action
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implement
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policy,it will provide a
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better
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