There is no doubt these days there are several positive and negative aspects of having a car. In this essay, I am going to talk about both advantages and disadvantages and I will give my own opinion.
There is no doubt that these days societies are facing a phenomenon called
globalization
. The question is that globalization
going to lea d
to a complete loss of cultural identity? In my opinion, I think that Correct your spelling
lead
globalization
has a big impact on our communities. In terms of disadvantages, globalization
has eradicated from peoples' heads their own religions. The main reason given to support this
claim is that a lot of Muslims nowadays are not practicing
their faith in an accurate way like in the past. And their faith now is intuitively affected by other religions around the world. To illustrate, some Arabic Muslims celebrate Christmas with their families in different cities in their countries and decorate their homes Change the spelling
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In other words
, they are imitating the western
culture which is prohibited in their religion and traditions. Capitalize word
Western
Thus
, impact
their relationship with their conservative societies. Correct subject-verb agreement
impacts
However
, many people
from different nations in the world respect their cultures, and they strongly believe that despite all of the developments which made the world a small valley and the ability of
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For example
, Jewish people
do not allow changes or any foreign habits which can alter their ways of worshiping
their god. Change the spelling
worshipping
Additionally
, many people
exploit globalization
, and they consider it an opportunity to share a variety of traditions and festivals among people
. In conclusion, although
globalization
has its pros, it has a big detrimental influence on our traditions. Therefore
, I believe that globalization
is a tip to go away from values and identities.Submitted by فارس 198 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion