Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level.

It is often argued that

art

subjects

have the same importance as other

subjects

at the elementary level. I completely agree with

this

opinion and think that artistry

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equally

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other aspects

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children

First

of all, I believe that giving equal treatment for all the

subjects

in primary

school

can give

children

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variety of interest choices.

Children

could learn and find out what aspects they like and do not like. If they love a certain subject, parents could focus on the subject and facilitate their

children

to learn more and become excel

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it.

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often

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in

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better performance when they are adult.

For example

, a lot of famous

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learned to play

piano

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since

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they were

child

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, giving them a ton of time to practice from

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very young age.

That is

why

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it is important to teach music and other

art

subjects

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elementary

school

.

Secondly

, exposing

children

to many

art

subjects

could make the learning experience much more fun. Math and other science

subjects

might be a boring

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for some

of

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children

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.

Children

who do not like science will find

school

boring, which could lead to

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low performance in

school

.

For example

, J.K Rowling, a famous writer for her popular novel Harry Potter, admitted that she has been consistently sitting in low ranking during

her

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elementary

school

because she hated math.

Although

she loved writing, there was no

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subject related to writing, which forced her to

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by herself

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home

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.

Thus

, ruling out

art

subjects

might decrease the attractiveness of

school

for some

children

. To conclude, I strongly believe that

art

subjects

are as principal as other

subjects

at elementary

school

because it gives

children

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choice of interests and

also

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school

much more fun.