Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What others measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays,

petrol

has various uses all around the world. Some people hold the view that rising the

price

of it will reduce growing traffic and

pollution

problems

.

However

, personally, I disagree with

this

notion.

This

essay will examine my point of view and other ways to improve

this

situation.

To begin

with, the main advantage of

petrol

is necessary for

economy

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. To explain, Industries have a lot of equipment

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that need

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need

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needs

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the

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petrol

for producing products.

For instance

, the food industries must be running the engines all the time and they need

a

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fuel for

this

operation. If

this

fuel is grown up his

price

, the products will be less.

Hence

,

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the economy. The more the cost is

more

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, the more

problems

will appear.

On the other hand

, experts believe that decreasing the

price

of

petrol

will minimize the growing traffic as well as

pollution

problems

.

This

issue can be solved by using electric cars.

For example

, there are now new vehicles that

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run

with

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electricity.

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,

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nuclear energy, which has a number of uses in many devices, can be used to solve

this

problem. These lead to the improvement of

this

phenomenon which can give

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positive input to society and healthy life. The less

pollution

in the community, the better environment the folks will have. In conclusion,

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the

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increasing

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of

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the

price

will reduce growing traffic and

pollution

effects, from point of view,

this

will minimize the activity of the country.

Moreover

, nuclear energy and electricity are effective ways to improve these

problems

.