• Some students found some subjects such as mathematics, philosophy are difficult, so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is known that some
students
face big difficulties learning such
complex Correct your spelling
subjects
subjectss
as math and philosophy, Correct your spelling
subjects
therefore
, it is suggested to allow students
to choice
whether they want to drop these Replace the word
choose
subjects
or continue learning them. I partially disagree with the given statement, and I think that this
policy could be applied only in the latest years of education (high school or college),
when mature Remove the comma
apply
students
have already chosen the
major sphere.
On the one hand, a basic knowledge Change the word
their
from
math, geography and history is Change preposition
of
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necessary
necessay
for Correct your spelling
necessary
young
generation in order to solve some problems in their daily basis life. If Add an article
the young
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graduated
graduate
graduaded
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graduate
students
from any place on the Earth know some major historical facts about the past, they can easily communicate with each other on different sorts of topics just because of the same knowledge in
history. That's why it is highly important for people to receive Change preposition
of
this
fundumental
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fundamental
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knowledge
knoledge
from school. Correct your spelling
knowledge
For example
, geographical facts about orienting on
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apply
place
helped me not to lose the way in a deep forest, whereas my girlfriend, who did not like geography at all, had some problems with navigation in the same forest.
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places
On the other hand
, some pupils have already decided what profession they are going to choice
. In Replace the word
choose
such
cases, it is really important for them to focus on their future career, and do
not distribute their time to other unnecessary Unnecessary verb
apply
subjects
. However
, there are just few
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a few
students
who know exactly the future profession. Hence
, a lot of dropped subjects
turn out being
very important for their current job. Change the verb form
to be
For instance
, I had
dropped geometry in the 8th grade because of its difficulty, but Unnecessary verb
apply
then
in the 11th grade
I looked Add a comma
,grade
myself
as an engineer without geometry knowledge.
In conclusion, I would say that Change preposition
at myself
students
should be allowed to drop some subjects
only if they are certain about the decision. Otherwise
all main Add a comma
,Otherwise
subjects
should be completed by students
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