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The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.

The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.
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The following two maps compare current and future development plans for the West Highway
area
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 of a town called Springsby. Briefly, the western road
area
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 of the city is planned to be developed soon, preserving the existing developed areas
such
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 as the Housing estate and the school. The
area
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 destined for the park will be reduced, establishing a large parking
area
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 there which will give order to the traffic and the congestion that will be generated with the creation of the large shopping
center
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. As mentioned.”d, the most significant change is the creation of two shopping
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 buildings, on both sides of "Western Road.” A bus station will be created next to the school with the purpose of bringing potential visitors to the
area
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, attracting a greater flow of potential customers to the Mall.
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 the plan, two parking areas will be built east of "Park Avenue" in the future, to meet the parking needs of residents and visitors to the shopping
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. As planned, the entire western road surface of Springsby Town will be used for the convenience of residents in the future.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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