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It is argued that the most important thing for governments invest in is education, and it is a popular opinion from people because the benefits such as short as a long time are very relevant.

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It is argued that the most important thing for governments invest in is
education
, and it is a popular opinion from people because the benefits
such
 as short as a long time are very relevant.
This
 essay agrees that increase in spending public resources on the student population can make grow up the countries in several aspects. It is clear that improving the quality of learning at all levels can enhance at the time the quality of life for society,
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for that reason must be a very important decision for every government to dedicate a huge part of its funds to
this
 aspect.
However
, undoubtedly,
education
 has given a radical approach to the continuous improvement of people as workers in the real job world. When the community is better prepared to face different positions in any variety of companies, its performance increase significantly, and the functioning of
this
 same company is going to improve considerably. Better workers achieve superior production and more profits.
In contrast
, if the government do not invest in
education
, its own economy could be curbed, the reason why the leaders must be weighed against the drawbacks of spending improperly the money. In my opinion, a good percentage of public funds must be destinated on
education
,
thus
 enable that people have the option to learn more and more getting smartest day by day. In conclusion, if governments spend money
in
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on
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education
, it can be available to everyone, enhance each aspect of people´s
life
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lives
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,
the
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and the
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 country´s economy, and even strengthen the presence of
own
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their own
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 country´s internationality.
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