One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, traffic jam has become a major concern in many urbanized cities.

Although

there are two main problems ascribed to

this

phenomenon, the government as well as individuals can take a number of measures in order to address them. Due to economic growth globally, more and more

people

can afford cars to improve their mobility and employment opportunities.

However

this

affects long and

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traffic jams in big cities and

megapolisoes

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megapolises

, which creates a lot of stress and

roadrage

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road rage

road-rage

among drivers and passengers. Another reason for the traffic congestion is that public

transportationsin

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transportation in

transportations in

transportations

the cities

are

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not properly arranged and of a low quality.

Therefore

, many

people

find personal cars more attractive and comfortable opting for purchasing automobiles. One of the solutions to the matter is to invest in public transport infrastructure in order to

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this

means of transportation over others.

In other words

bus-stops

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bus stops

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, bus lines or modern trains or buses provide attractiveness,

which

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and

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people

prefer public transport to private cars. Another way to tackle the issue might be a strong

propogand

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propaganda

and publicity of car-sharing, bike riding and online working as well as shopping which aim at encouraging

people

to use

car

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less. By the way of conclusion, I firmly believe that in spite of having several issues, these issues can be tackled by the

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collaborative

actions of

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the state

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with individuals

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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traffic congestion
urban population
public transportation
urban planning
infrastructure
economic strength
consumerism
car ownership
commuting
peak hours
public transit
carpooling
ride-sharing
remote work
flexible working hours
cycling infrastructure
congestion charges
traffic management systems

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Fully explain your ideas

Many claim that tha fast food industry has a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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