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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

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No doubt, educating younger generations plays a very important role in the development of individuals, societies and nations. But the question, "where should we teach our
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? has contrasting views: while some of us strongly support the
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 taught at
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 for their better development,
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 of the side highly advocates
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 them to schools. Undoubtedly, education at these both places
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 unique importance and benefits, but in my opinion, it is necessary for a
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 to take classes in a
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 to succeed in his
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her future
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. Education at
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 provides a
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 opportunity to have personal and one-to-one care, leading his
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her to develop strong emotional
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 which play a necessary part in
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his
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her success in the coming years
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 and
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 remove deficiencies in his
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her studies.
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 always love their children the most,
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teach them
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life
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skills
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 and help them perform better in their educational environment because they keenly and constantly observe their
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, helping them figure out and address emotional and studios problems,
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 face
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 different occasions. If a
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 just goes to
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school
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, and
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 do not give him
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her proper attention, a
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 may end up
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her studies because of some inferiority complex.
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 role in a
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's development is vital in order to have a tension-free
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 ahead. Schools not only teach reading and writing to the young ones
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 educate social
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 and provide motivation to
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her fellows to become more successful. Unless you do not spend time in a social group of your age, you cannot learn how to behave with others. As we all know, if a
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 does not attend
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, his
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her communication and interpersonal
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not be as good as compared to the ones who are trained in an educational institution.
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 why, to develop better social
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, it is necessary for
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 taught in a
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. Personally, I give more weightage to studying in a
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 rather than being educated at
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 because
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, beyond any doubt, are true friends and well-wishers of their
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 who try their best to make their
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 escape any emotional trauma and educational hurdles, but without studying at a
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 may lead towards becoming a sociopath because of lack of interaction with peers which provides a real-
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 experience of how to spend a successful
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. Training is a key to success; and it can be achieved by teaching
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 at
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 as well as at
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,
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, missing a
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 may have serious implications
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practical
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the practical
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 lives of the children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tailored learning
  • peer pressure
  • flexibility
  • instill values
  • socialization
  • communication skills
  • specialized facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • diversity
  • structured environment
  • customized education
  • well-rounded education
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