Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Should
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and marts take the lead to minimize packaging of goods or it is the buyers who should prefer unpacked
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in order to decrease the number of packaging of
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to avoid environmental pollution? In
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regard, there are two diverse opinions: some
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blame
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and shopkeepers for not doing enough to decrease the amount of packaging while others want layman to prefer unpacked
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. In
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essay, I shall discuss both views and
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give my own opinion. No doubt, producers and shop-owners can do a lot to decrease the amount of packaging of their sale-goods in order to keep the environment neat and and clean.
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, they should not pack the
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which can easily be sold unpacked
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as milk and butter as in our villages
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buy open-milk and unpacked butter, using their own utensils.
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, larger size of packing may be helpful to lower down the number of packing, say,
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of making one-kilo grams of ghee
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,
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of five kilo grams may be prepared so that larger quantity may be sold in one packet.
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, the
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and supermarkets can easily take a start to bring down today's figure of
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.
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, the role of layman in
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regard cannot be ignored, they can
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help the
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and mart-owners to pack more quantity in one packet by buying larger
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which will be an encouraging point for the
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to start a new era and culture of good packings.
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, when unpacked goods are available and they are not harmful for the health
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as pulses, dates and grams to name a few, why should they demand them in
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? If
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start avoing
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kind of packed
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, they will compel the
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to sell them unpacked.
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, in order to discourage the
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from packing the everyday usable
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, the role of
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can be leading and decisive. In my personal opinion, both parties: producers and consumers, have to actively take part in
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exercise to minimize the packaging practice, and it can easily be achieved if the government, media and organisations start educating them regardign the harmful effects of packing on on environment in general and on the living
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in specific. Summing up, it is the responsibility of the
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as well as the buyers to take necessary steps to bring down the culture of more and more packaging because all of them are eager to have a healthy sorroundings, and formal and informal education through different sources can definitely boost-up the efforts.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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