Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used money-making traditions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The development of the

tourism

industry forces

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agents to utilize all of the resources to offer new experiences. There is some debate

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commercializing cultural

traditions

is destroying them. From my perspective, both views have their own justification. On the one hand, the expansion

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cultural

tourism

has several profound effects. The

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negative impact is that uncontrolled mass

tourism

can damage cultural heritage sites.

For instance

, the massive influx of tourists in the ancient town of Hoi An carved their names on rock art, which vandalized ancient monuments and caused irreparable

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Additionally

, the growth of

tourism

has resulted in the deterioration of the environment and the

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of natural resources. A typical example is the construction of large hotels near Angkor Wat, which has affected the water table beneath the temples.

On the other hand

, proponents of selling cultural tours

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paramount to the conservation and restoration of cultural

traditions

argue that commercializing cultural

traditions

is the one and only method to keep them from disappearing.

First

, The increase in the number of visitors provides funds for restoration and protection efforts. Without

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sufficient financial support, various attraction sites may fall into disrepair.

Hence

, creating incentives helps local communities to support the conversation. Another compelling reason is that cultural values can be promoted through

tourism

activities. Visitors can visit historical exhibits or talk to indigenous people to gain

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the area's culture.

This

encourages the revival of

traditions

and restores cultural heritage sites and monuments In conclusion, It is unquestionable that developing

tourism

brings both merits and demerits. The government and the authorities should take careful consideration before making the decision of expanding the

tourism

industry.