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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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Holiday destinations are always popular topics among societies. Many
people
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 think that in future, most
people
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 will take trips
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 their homeland.
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 essay will discuss both arguments, whether one would want to
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 inside the
country
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 or go outside and share my opinion as to why the latter is the better approach than the former one.
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, taking a trip to the same
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 you live in, saves a big amount of money. As the cost of an international flight is the biggest part of
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 expenses, one can save
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 amount by travelling
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 their home town.
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, there are a lot of spots and attractions in my
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 that are worth visiting.
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, individuals can save time by taking short trips around where they live. There are many
people
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 who have an extremely busy routine and always lack time to make preparations for international
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.
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, long-distance flights might not be appealing to everyone.
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, there are too many benefits to travelling abroad.
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 of all, you can learn about other nations' historical heritage. Knowing about different cultures and the way others live broadens our horizons.
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, too many
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 take trips to India every year to learn about the diversity of religions there.
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, it is worth visiting different countries as every
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 is unique and different in natural aspects. Actually, by coming out of your comfort zone, you can explore new natural places around the world.
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, Turkey has breathtaking views of jungle, sea and green hills that make it different from other tourist attractions. In conclusion,
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 local
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 saves money and time, I believe in the future
people
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 will still be interested in going abroad in order to explore new cultures and attractions.
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