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Nowadays many colleges and universities are offering online courses for students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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These days, the advancement of technology enables universities and schools to provide online classes for their
students
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 essay, the pros and cons of the development will be examined before my perspective is reached. First of all, online courses are more convenient and flexible for
students
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 as they can study via their laptop at their home without commuting to the classroom. It leads to
students
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 around the world
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 access to beneficial knowledge resources, regardless of being in remote areas or even other countries.
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, kids in Thailand can graduate with a master's degree in business management from a prestigious university
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 as Harward University.
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, the remote learning system contributes to saving a huge amount of costs, which
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 to run the universities consisting of electric bills, building construction and maintenance, and many more.
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, many benefits can be easily
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 from the online learning platform.
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, learning via the laptop screen cannot form a friendship between children, and socialization, which face-to-face teaching can effectively form it.
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 my experience, I could not remember anyone's name or the face of my classmate in the Zoom meeting application,
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 the course took more than a week to finish.
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, it is more difficult to focus the lesson from the small screen and easily be distracted by other interesting things, namely games, social media, and other entertaining applications.
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 the published research, kids aged lower than 12 years old cannot concentrate on the curriculum implemented online.
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, some people reckon that it is not suitable for
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. In conclusion, the aforementioned benefits including saving costs and being more effective than ordinary classes outweigh its drawbacks. In my opinion, we should apply online technology in the field of education, and in the future, its advantages will be minimized
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your introduction clearly states your opinion and outlines the points you will discuss. Structure your essay with clear topic sentences and examples that support your argument.
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You should provide a clear opinion in the introduction and address all parts of the question. Spending more time defining and supporting your opinion will strengthen your response.
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