Many people depend on their cars for everyday domestic, social, and working needs. However, unlimited use of cars causes a number of problems. What are some of these problems? What can be done to reduce the use of cars?

Cars

are being used widely for various purposes including domestic, social and

working

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.

However

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the using of too

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cars

can be the culprit of many serious problems. In

this

essay

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I will analyze some of these problems and come up with the appropriate solution to reduce the use of

cars

. In today’s world,

cars

are being considered

as

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the main

transport

for different situations,

this

can lead to the overuse of

cars

and worsen the situation of the global climate and

traffic

jams. The logic here is that most of our

cars

run on fossil fuels,

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process of generating power from

this

kind of fuel

also

creates a lot of toxic chemicals that

afterward

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being

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released

to

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the environment. These extremely poisonous chemicals are the main factors of global warming, due to the fact that these substances can severely damage the ozone layer, a shield that protects our planet from the hot burning sun.

A research

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conducted by Harvard University showed that the average temperature of the earth has increased by degrees in the course of 10 years from 2010 to 2020

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the main reason for

these phenomena

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this phenomenon

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is the

increase

in the

amount

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number

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of

cars

. Another problem that can not be ignored is the

increase

of

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traffic

jams. With the huge

amount

of

cars

that are being used, many road systems have become overloaded since they can not afford the huge

amount

of vehicles that are being used, especially in

the

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rush hour.

This

is known as

traffic

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jam and it can take a heavy toll on the economy of a nation. The overuse of

cars

can create a lot of problems for the environment as well as the situation of

traffic

congestion.

Therefore

to reduce the

amount

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of

cars

the

government

should come up with policies to hamper the use of

cars

and

increase

the use of public transportation.

First

of all, the

government

should

increase

the overall price of

cars

or raise the tax on

using

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cars

as a vehicle.

This

can lower the demand for

cars

, reducing the

amount

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number

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of

cars

in

traffic

.

Second

, the

government

should encourage its people to switch to public

transport

.

This

can be done by reducing the cost of using public

transport

or even

provide

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a

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free transportation;

also

the

government

can develop a better, more suitable public

transport

system, encouraging people to switch to

this

type of transportation. In conclusion, the overuse of

cars

can have a detrimental effect on the global temperature as well as the situation of

traffic