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You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are well and in good spirits as you receive
this
 note. Please convey my best wishes to the entire family. I am writing to express my gratitude for the perplexing experience we had during my stay. To commence with,
being-watching
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 Netflix with Maggie and
a
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cup of coffee in hand reminded me of our school days. Visiting the campus was a fantastic experience,
while
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 we were able to remember those carefree days when there was no pressure to work hard in order to make ends meet.
Furthermore
, I
had
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 like to express my sincere gratitude to your mother for the delectable Indian cuisine she prepares at home. The delectable experience was fantastic,
as well as
 I envisioned myself in India, spending precious time with my family at the dinner table,
sharing
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 our favourite meals.
Finally
, I strongly urge you to visit Canada in the future months with your entire family, including your cat. It will be enjoyable, and we will go on numerous adventure trips,
such
 as visiting Niagara
as well as
 museums and many more. With love and warm regards, Nithisha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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