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mobile phones have changed the way many people communicate. Nowadays people cannot live without them if they want to be a part of sociaty. to what extend do you think this is true?

#phones #people #part #sociaty
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 life, one has to earn money. Nowadays people, thanks to the drastic progress in industrialization and commercialization, are given multiple options
such
 as taking up
employment
 in an organization or doing their own business.
However
, both options have their own perks and
also
 negative sides. Let's deep dive into the pros and cons of each side and see what are my thoughts on
this
 topic. Let's explore the case of
employment
first
; the main advantage of
this
 option is that they have a steady and fixed income which is very helpful in terms of mitigating their financial needs in the future. They don't have to invest the capital and just require your time, effort, knowledge, and dedication to a company or employer. The setback to
this
 mode of earning is the increment to the salary is less with respect to the alarmingly high inflation. The mode of self-
employment
,
on the other hand
, provides the freedom to
work
 as you like it which is very much required to maintain a balanced lifestyle between
work
 and life. Unlike
employment
,
this
 mode of
work
 can pay him more as an owner you can decide the price of your time for the
work
 you do.
Nevertheless
, there is a risk of unstable income when one pursues self-
employment
.
For instance
, during the pandemic situation, people who do self-
employment
 suffer at most due to the regulations imposed on lockdown. Having heard the arguments from both sides, I think it would be better to pursue
employment
 as it provides a standard lifestyle and
also
 I am sure with the help of upgrading relevant skills one can make their employers satisfy them with the right monetary benefit
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