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Advancements in technology have given rise to several environmental problems. Some people believe that in order to solve environmental problems, people need to live simpler lives. However, others believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 modern era,
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 that plays a vital role in human
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 affects the environment in many ways leading to pollution and depletion of natural
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.
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 set of people believes that living
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 simpler might resolve
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 issue. While others suggest that using modern machines will solve
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 problem. In my opinion, using advanced systems is
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 of the great assets to mitigate the environmental problem and provide a long-term solution to
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 issue. On
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 hand, people recommend living
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 in uncomplicated manners
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 as preferring walking or cycling rather than a car or bike. By doing so, air pollution will be controlled to a greater extent and
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 like petrol and diesel are conserved.
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 to that, the public might consider reducing the control of electricity thereby, the exploitation of natural
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 like fossil fuels and natural power is reduced significantly.
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, an annual event an "Earth hour" is held once every year where everyone turns off their electricity for
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 hour.
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, many inventions in
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 help in the use of recycling paper and glasses which significantly reduced the problem of water disposal.
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,
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 can be used to generate electricity by using natural
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 and renewables.
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, many industries of the nations use the latest methods to generate power by utilising solar and wind energy which facilitates manufacturing. To conclude,
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 is a great asset to the world, and exploring the opportunities to make use of efficient technological methodologies to migrate environmental issues is the wisest decision compared to letting go and leading a simple
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.

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