A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you since I know you are collecting articles from your readers on the topic of the most influential

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. So far as I am concerned, I would consider Harry Potter should be the most popular

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in the world. Harry Potter is a fiction which is written by J.K Rowling. It mainly tells a story of a boy who is studying in a magic school. He and his fellows have adventured a lot in

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school and have succeeded defeated their enemies. I have been deeply impressed by

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book

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with, it tells me what is braveness and how to face the fear in my heart.

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, I have learnt that we should appreciate the friendship with my friends. I am sure

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book

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will have a great impact on other people.

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, it is said that the sale amount of

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book

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has reached the top 3 in the world.

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, the story of Harry Potter has been taken to the movie screen. Yours sincerely, Jason.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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