Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school politics de you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Schools
are not only limited for
the academic progress of the Change preposition
to
students
, but also
they teach mandatory lessons like:
discipline, uniformity and responsibility. It has been quite a debate for a few years whether should freshmen need to wear Remove the comma
apply
uniforms
or not?
In some high Change the punctuation
.
schools
the strict policy for Add a comma
,schools
uniforms
is changed and schools
allow students
to wear what they choose. In my opinion, wearing a uniform is the best idea because of several reasons which will be illustrated in the following essay.
To begin
with, not every student can afford to wear different outfits every day. Simply, this
is a problem that middle-class families are facing because of leniency in the policy. Moreover
, it creates a sense of inferiority complex in students
who are from an impoverished backgrounds
and they become Correct the article-noun agreement
impoverished backgrounds
an impoverished background
Add an article
a victim
the victim
victim
of bullying and teasing by other affluent peers. Fix the agreement mistake
victims
For example
, my friend got the
scholarship Correct article usage
a
in
a well-known high Change preposition
to
school
, but she was not able to meet the standards of that place; ultimately, she became so frustrated that she left that school
.
Secondly
, It is more easy
and more economical to wear Replace the words
easier
uniforms
because students
need to focus on their studies rather than concentrating on what to wear and what not to in school
?
Change the punctuation
.
School
uniforms
are much cheaper than buying expensive clothes and taking care of them. For instance
, In my school
, we are free to wear whatever we wanted and I got extremely indulged to find new styles and dresses to wear that I barely passed my exams.
In conclusion, school
policies are never meant to be trouble for students
, but some policies generated distance among peers and loss of confidence in some financially unstable students
. these policies should be banned and uniforms
should be promoted in schools
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