Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is

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of information. It contains all of

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in the world. From the society, fashion,

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,

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to study. So

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some people say that

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are neglected and not necessary nowadays. Personally, I partly agree with

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opinion because

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are as significant as the

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. There are several reasons why

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should be in lieu of

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.

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, the

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is better than

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.

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have

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lots of

websites

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, you can choose the

websites

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you like

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as

:

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cooking, listening to music, reading newspapers, learning…. In studying, through the

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that

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lessons

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were composed very

detailed

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. Even so, some

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have videos about the

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. These videos were taught by teachers all over the world.

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, if you forget the

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, you can open the

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to learn over and over again.

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, it’s very convenient. You just only bring a phone and learn everywhere. When travelling you want to review homework but

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bring

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books or

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books or

notebooks,

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will help you. So

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is the choice you can try it. On the other

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,

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are very important.

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to school is the regulation of education. Students

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to go to

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to

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, you can meet teachers and friends. In some

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you don’t understand, you

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ask teachers. They teach you

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about

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and help you understand easily. You can

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create

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with your friends. That helps you

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more friendly and

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in communication.

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make you study better and have

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fun in your life. In conclusion, going to school or studying through the

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are

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choice of you. Both of them help you too much in your learning. Not just

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to school or

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in

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the

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, you can

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choose both.