Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Internet

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is

source

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the source

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of information. It contains all of

things

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the things

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in the world. From the society, fashion,

cultural

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culture

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,

tradition

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and tradition

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to study. So

that

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some people say that

schools

are neglected and not necessary nowadays. Personally, I partly agree with

this

opinion because

schools

are as significant as the

Internet

. There are several reasons why

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the Internet

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should be in lieu of

schools

.

Firstly

, the

Internet

is better than

schools

.

Internet

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The Internet

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have

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lots of

websites

, you can choose the

websites

you like

such

as

:

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cooking, listening to music, reading newspapers, learning…. In studying, through the

Internet

that

have

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lessons

were composed very

detailed

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detail

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. Even so, some

websites

have videos about the

lessons

. These videos were taught by teachers all over the world.

Secondly

, if you forget the

lessons

, you can open the

websites

to learn over and over again.

Finally

, it’s very convenient. You just only bring a phone and learn everywhere. When travelling you want to review homework but

not

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do not

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bring

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books or

bookstore

booksorr

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books or

notebooks,

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the Internet

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will help you. So

that

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Internet

is the choice you can try it. On the other

hands

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,

schools

are very important.

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Going

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to school is the regulation of education. Students

obliged

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are obliged

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to go to

schools

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school

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. When

go

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going

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to

schools

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school

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, you can meet teachers and friends. In some

lessons

you don’t understand, you

also

ask teachers. They teach you

carefully

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care

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about

this

and help you understand easily. You can

also

create

relation

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relationships

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with your friends. That helps you

are

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be

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more friendly and

confidence

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confident

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in communication.

Schools

make you study better and have

many

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much

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fun in your life. In conclusion, going to school or studying through the

Internet

are

the

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your

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choice of you. Both of them help you too much in your learning. Not just

go

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going

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to school or

learn

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learning

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in

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on

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the

Internet

, you can

also

choose both.