In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, people can reach to
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number of data and knowledge sources.
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children
are
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exceptions.
For example
, they can obtain what they want to know just by logging
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the internet.
As a result
, some people came to believe that there are no more
needs
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for physical
teachers
in classrooms.
However
, I cannot agree with
this
idea due to mainly two reasons, namely controlling school
children
's behaviours and motivating them to continue their
studies
. As
such
,
this
essay is to discuss these two major merits of
teachers
to justify my position to disagree with the statement.
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of all, as said
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above, small
children
need physical
teachers
in the classroom who can guide and control their learning behaviours.
For example
, those
kids
who cannot concentrate on their
studies
need to be managed by tutors who can give them
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discipline
dicipline
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discipline
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to behave. Without the management from guiding adults, many school
kids
may lose their focus and left being astray, and
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their academic career may fail to be completed. AI
teachers
cannot control
this
aspect of
kids
' learning,
therefore
, I believe classroom
teachers
are still necessary. In
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, real guiding tutors are
also
important to motivate and guide the
children
.
For instance
, professional
teachers
can provide interactive advice to students in their class
how
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they can determine trustworthy data and knowledge resources from information which are not reliable.
Also
, they can monitor
children
's conditions and offer some exciting books or documents which may attract the
kids
' interest and increase their will to pursue their academic
studies
.
This
type of
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teaching is something only a real teacher can do,
therefore
online learning alone cannot
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achieve
achive
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achieve
this
important aspect of learning. In conclusion, from the reasons listed above, I believe even in the modern world, there exists
a
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plenty
room
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for physical
teachers
should play. Namely, controlling and motivating
children
so that they can correctly develop their academic careers and with their ongoing motivations to enhance their
studies
.
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