In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?
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As a result
, some people came to believe that there are no more needs
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teachers
in classrooms. However
, I cannot agree with this
idea due to mainly two reasons, namely controlling school children
's behaviours and motivating them to continue their studies
. As such
, this
essay is to discuss these two major merits of teachers
to justify my position to disagree with the statement.
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of all, as said in
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children
need physical teachers
in the classroom who can guide and control their learning behaviours. For example
, those kids
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on how
kids
may lose their focus and left being astray, and eventually
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,eventually
teachers
cannot control this
aspect of kids
' learning, therefore
, I believe classroom teachers
are still necessary.
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also
important to motivate and guide the children
. For instance
, professional teachers
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Also
, they can monitor children
's conditions and offer some exciting books or documents which may attract the kids
' interest and increase their will to pursue their academic studies
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this
important aspect of learning.
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of room
teachers
should play. Namely, controlling and motivating children
so that they can correctly develop their academic careers and with their ongoing motivations to enhance their studies
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