Question: More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than in person (e.g. banking, shopping, hotel booking, etc.). Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
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by the advantages.
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product
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could be solved by the proper authorization and laws for dishonesty.
To be concluded, considering the points discussed above, the most retional
conclusion to be drawn is that, the Correct your spelling
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, it could be sorted out in future.Submitted by alina.aphrodite on
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