In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
In today's world, all people have various dreams and according to some, they will be able to fulfil them only if their tries begin at
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However
, in some nations people believe that unless the
youngsters try enough hard, they can achieve their aspirations in Correct article usage
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years. In the following, the pros and cons of Correct pronoun usage
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this
assumption will be discussed to some extent.
To begin
with its advantages, it is clear that if the young generation is asked to do their best in order that acquires whatever they want, probably, they may learn to act in a
effective way and without reliance on somebody else, they can definitely concentrate on their own abilities to construct their future. Inevitably, by following Change the article
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way, their skills and self-confidence would be developed. For instance
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On the other hand
, in spite of the mentioned good points, this
coin actually has the other side; its drawbacks. By forcing kids to try more in order to obtain anything, they could feel considerably stressed out and as a consequence, in the long run, they may lose their ambition to stick to their wants. Unfortunately, in this
case
many of those can easily give up from their way and hardly continue making progress. As an illustration, if families put their children under Add a comma
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pressure, consequently
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also
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In conclusion of what is aforementioned, however
, some argue that the
children's achievements depend on the hardships they tolerate to satisfy their dreams, the other including me believe that it is far better to consider the disadvantages Correct article usage
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besides
the advantages. From my perspective, the much
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solution is that giving Correct quantifier usage
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such
advice to young ones is accomplished by a few flexibilities and avoiding putting much more pressure on them.Submitted by niloufarhaghighat on
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