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Todays more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative.

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Nowadays people are getting technological devices and
robots
 in order to do
the
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tasks
 both at home and
work
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at work
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 day by day. Everything has its pros and cons. The following paragraphs discuss whether
advantage
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advantages
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 or
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 and reach a conclusion.
Firstly
,
robots
 are the most reliable assistants at home and at
work
. With their
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helps
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 we can do difficult
tasks
, easily.
For example
, cleaning and cooking can be done with one button they do these activities easily.Performing
such
tasks
 with the help of a robot makes life easier for a busy person.
In addition
, gadgets are considered to be the friend of humans. Because they can listen to your secret and not tell anyone about it.
However
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 you should not get addicted to these gadgets. Because they can be dangerous.
For example
, old people
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predominately
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predominatingly
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 fail how to use them and children are not allowed to use
robots
 alone. In my
opinion
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 everything should be used in moderation. Most humans do not know that. And
these
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 leads to a miserable situation. Research shows that not all gadgets are suitable for
work
. In
conclusion
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 the service of
robots
 to humanity is great, but it should be used in moderation.
Therefore
 the development of using
robots
 at home and at
work
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 to do
tasks
 cannot be estimated as negative or positive.
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