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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #technology
Nowadays we have two opposite opinions about modern
technology
. One part of society believes that cutting-edge
technology
 helps us to be more sociable.
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 of
people
 thinks it is making them less sociable. I agree with
opinion
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the opinion
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 that humans should use
technology
 carefully. In
this
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 I offer to discuss both views of
this
 case. On the one
hand
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the
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gadgets are the routine of modern life. It really helps
people
 in different directions as to cook,
to be
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 healthy,
to study
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,
to work
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 and others.
However
,
first
 and foremost, modern
technology
 is making
people
 more sociable.
For instance
, the main advantage of
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modern
technology
 is to be online
for
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close
people
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 in spite of the distance (
for example
, mobile video chat).
This
 possibility was very useful during the quarantine due to covid2019.
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hand
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using
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gadgets as an instrument of communication is making
people
 less sociable. In
this
way
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 they lose their habits of life conversation and prefer to stay home.
For example
, social media give the illusion that
people
 as
the
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members of society have
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a dialog
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dialog
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 with others, but
this
 is
false
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 feeling. For
this
reason
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 humans lose their
relationship
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relationships
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 with relatives,
friend
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friends
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,
coworkers
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and coworkers
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. The given essay illustrated as good
as
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 bad opportunities of modern
technology
. In
conclusion
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 Each person should find the limits
for
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 using new gadgets without the problem with his social life.
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  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
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  • decision fatigue
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