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some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

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It has been considered by a few individuals that entertainers make very much
money
 and which is an alternative platform for getting high salaries. According to my perspective most other sources for making
money
.
To begin
 with,there are many pathways to getting high
money
.
Firstly
, if people have
good
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 education, they can get easily
white-collar
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 job which provides them with
wonderful
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 wage.
For example
, in multiple ,companies individuals
obtain
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who obtain
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 too much
money
such
 as amazon,BMW and extra provide extremely high profits by
the
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selling their products. So that it is beneficial for the community.
Furthermore
, entertainers
also
makes
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make
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 fantastic
money
 through their performance on stage shows and street dancers but not all
the
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entertainers get much
money
 because only famous performers can make good
money
. So It is a good platform for
this
. To conclude, it can be analysed from the above discussion that there are abundant od merits and demerits of
this
 statement,
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 drawbacks cannot be overlooked.
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