You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to convey my displeasure over the quality of service your company has been rendering in my area recently. Among a plethora of inefficiencies, unreliability stands out. The buses in question are; B1002 and B1003. Within a fortnight, these services repeatedly arrived 15 minutes late. Their lateness automatically translates to me arriving late at my workplace. At the same time, causing my son to be late for school as well. In other instances, the bus did arrive early enough,

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, the driver had to perform emergency repairs on the engine of the vehicle, again, resulting in the service departing late. From the foregoing, I am inclined to believe the drivers are experiencing mechanical issues with their vehicles; having witnessed one myself. I am,

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, pleading that you use your good offices to ensure the faults are fixed so that we can once again, enjoy excellent services from your organization. I hope you will take my complaint and advice to heart and the necessary actions will be taken. Yours sincerely, Harry

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task response

Fully address the prompt by detailing the problems faced with the bus service, the impact on the writer, and a clear suggestion for improvement.

coherence and cohesion

Organize ideas in a more structured manner. Consider using appropriate transition words and phrases to enhance coherence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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