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Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous to study in the same school. What is your opinion?

#people #girls #boys #study #school
Education
 is a learning experience, where an individual learns about various aspect of life, and understand a different perspective
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daily life.
Education
 is very important to
both
girls
 and
boys
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society. Indeed, it is very helpful for children to study at the same
school
, it
give
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 them knowledge of the world around them and
change
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 it into something better if a child join d in a
school
 together, they will know each other by playing around them, when
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they
the
 study to the same
school
 the power to study hard, according to nelson
madela
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model
, when
both
girlds
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girls
 and
boys
 to the same
school
 give them
courage
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 to change the world to a better place. On the other side
girls
 and
boys
 shouldn’t separate because one
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 to be together to have a brilliant
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future
futur
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future
, by helping each other.
Moreover
,
education
 is the best thing that
every one
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 should have
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 to have,
this
 way
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the
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both
girls
 and
boys
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will start building goals at an early stage. When
both
 of them are leaving together they will understand what position will help them to
acquiring
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 knowledge, and they will learn together slowly to grab to
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.
Conclusion
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,
education
 is the most important and valuable gift that god has given us to
both
girls
 and
boys
 by attending the same
school
, it
mean
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really
realy
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an
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important word by seeing
both
girls
 and
boys
.
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