In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
Being homeowner plays a vital role in
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a
this
contemporary Era. There for the reason in few Nations folk gives much Momentous to owning a home rather than renting one
.There are plethora
of reasons for Add an article
a plethora
such
a situation. And I strongly believe that is
a positive development. So both aspects will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with; discussing the reasons, the first
and foremost reason is that if a person
has own
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their own
his own
her own
house
so it can not only gives peace but also
immense joy.This
is because that person
can renovate their Abode by his choice. Moreover
, one
problem can be destroyed as many times we have been observing that after one
year period of time,when the Agreement is finish
, so they have to transfer all household items from Wrong verb form
finished
one
end to other
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the other
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other
reason is that in many culture plethora Change the wording
another
person
believe that a person
who pay
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pays
a
amount of money in renting. So, it indicates that they are not wealthy. For instance, in India parents visit the Change the article
an
house
for looking probable match for their daughter's marriage and mostly they do not prefer who has been paying rent. Thus
, a number of people try to own a house
instead
of renting one
.
Moving ahead, I consider that is
a definitely beneficial development because it is one
type of investment for the future. Which will be helpful not only nasty time but also
in retirement life.For,example a person
who bought a house
in
20 million at a younger age and after 30 years Change preposition
for
this
same abode he would sell so he will get almost
two-fold amount of money. Add an article
the almost
Hence
, this
approach is beneficial in the long term.
To conclude, it can be said that although
when the person
trying to become an owner of the house
, it
might Correct pronoun usage
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she
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the initial
but
that will be helped in the future as an investment. So individuals as well as the family live Remove the conjunction
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better
life in retirement.Add an article
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