Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people say that working for one
company
all their life is beneficial, while others argue that it is a good idea to Use synonyms
work
for many companies. Use synonyms
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company
gives more benefits financially, working at various places gives Use synonyms
employees
a better Use synonyms
work
experience.
Working for a single organisation their whole life has a few advantages like, Use synonyms
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employees
might receive a larger amount of gratuity on completion of many years in a single Use synonyms
company
. Use synonyms
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employees
might even be upgraded for higher facilities of a medical plan as being in the same Use synonyms
company
. Use synonyms
For instance
, As per RBI salary structure if the employee works for more than 10 years should receive 15 per cent of their package plus will get an advance health benefits card.
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On the other hand
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employees
changing from one organisation to another will get a chance to Use synonyms
work
on many systems and Use synonyms
this
helps in gaining more knowledge. Linking Words
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, learning new technologies gives more opportunities. Linking Words
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employees
have more weightage in the market and will end up getting a high paid jobs. Use synonyms
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this
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cultures.
To conclude, Working for one organisation your whole life only have fewer benefits, When compared with working at many companies gives good experience and high salaries. IUse synonyms
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, therefore,
therefore
say that working in different places has more advantages than being in the same place.Linking Words
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