You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 254 words.

There is a trend in Pakistan to broadcast negative news on electronic and print

media

. It is observed the publication and broadcasting of

crimes

and violent behaviours develop highly negative attitudes among the viewers.

Therefore

, it is suggested not to telecast

such

news in the

media

, and I fully agree with

this

stance because it normalises the

crimes

among the general public, and when they go unpunished, more

people

dare to commit

such

heinous missions.

First

of all, it is very necessary to keep

crimes

the

crimes

and violence the violence, and in order to achieve

this

goal, these ulcers of humankind should be kept away from

general

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public because if

everyday

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people

watch and read

such

reports, they may start considering it part of their culture, a normal thing happens every other day in

different

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a different

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part of the countries.

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,

as

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in

Pakistani

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context, the military dictators have been breaching the law and constitution, and have ruled the country for decades. What helped them to do so? Their actions have been publicised more and more through

media

houses, no

matters

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positively

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whether positively

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or negatively, it normalised their

crimes

in the minds of the masses and

people

started thinking it is acceptable if they breach the constitution.

Therefore

, there should not be

such

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level

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of broadcasting of negative things that

people

may adopt it into their culture.

Furthermore

, the worst part of

this

episode is when

the

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heinous

crimes

go unpunished, more and more

people

may indulge themselves

to

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such

negative activities.

As quite

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recently we have seen a person named Sharukh Jatoi,

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the slaughter

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slaughter

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of

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an innocent boy

,

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was released from the courts by offering money to the heirs of the slaughtered boy, it has created a very adverse phenomenon

on

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the general public: the rich think they can be released from the courts whatever crime they commit, and the poor are afraid there is no security and justice in the country,

hence

stressed. Had

this

particular case not been highlighted in the

media

at

this

level, the rich may still be afraid of the law, and the poor may still have

the

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hope. Summing up, publicizing the

crimes

do

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not stop them, but

give

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them

a

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rise by normalising

it

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and letting the criminal escape from the courts;

therefore

, neither the

crimes

should be broadcasted on

media

channels nor the criminals.