Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at schools while others think it is a waste of time. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.

While some citizens believe that

art

is a waste of time, I believe that

art

is

crucial

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class

for pupils to improve their self-esteem. On the one hand, many people think that teaching

art

at school is wasting time because

this

is not an academic subject for students.

Firstly

, some

parents

dislike schools that teach

art

to their

children

because they are not gaining a higher educational

levelon

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level on

level

subjects

such

English

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or math.

Also

, the

class

is perceived as a waste of time because

this

class

is not consider

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as

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an academic subjects

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an academic subject

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.

For instance

, according to the

last

study in Mexico in 2019 that stays that

art

is a subject considered for private schools because

this

class

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requires

requieres

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requires

specific materials, and

this

is consider

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an expensive and

innecessary

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subject

subjetc

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subject

to teach.

However

, I believe

this

class

should be included in the school program to develop skills for drawing or playing an instrument at

early

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age.

On the other hand

, more tutors who take more serious their

children

's education believe that

art

is a crucial

class

for young students to improve their self-esteem by learning

art

.

To begin

with, many

parents

support that music stimulates

children

's

brain

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and

this

might help them to become smarter, and self-confident.

Also

,

parents

value

art

as an essential skill for

children

to help them know about music or drawing. To illustrate, in The United States, most of the public schools teach

art

as

academic

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subject in which

children

have the opportunity to learn how to play a musical instrument with the help of a professional

musichian

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musician

. I believe

this

is

a

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preferable thinking to help our young generation to learn and develop more skills to help them to

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succeed

succed

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succeed

in life. To conclude,

although

many

parents

are not agree

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on

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the

believe

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that

art

is essential, most of

the

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society strongly

think

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thinks

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that

this

class

is vital for

children

to learn at school because they can learn skills that help them to

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improve

impove

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improve

their self-esteem and succeed in life.