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Summarise the information about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. shows where the money came from.

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The table shows the amount of money which is considered as the income of the police in a specific area in Britain, whereas, the pie chart illustrates how it was spent. Overall, what stands out from the table is that there were three sources of incoming budgets for the police during 2017 and 2018
that is
 crystal clear the amount of money in 2018 experienced a slight increase. Another significant point is regarding the categories of spending money during two years that show after one year the investment in technology by police increased by around twice more as in 2017.
Firstly
, the income comparison between 2017 and 2018 depicts that local taxes was the one that went up moderately from 91.2 to 102.3 million pounds.
Secondly
, we can consider the national government and other sources categories
such
 as grants in the same range which saw a slight increase.
On the other hand
, the pie charts illustrate that the salaries of officers and staff decreased from 75% to 69%, while the technology items went up to 145. Meanwhile, building and transport stood at the same level in 2017.
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