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As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?

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There is no debate, that as
children
 grow into
adults
, they change and not just on the outside, but on the inside too. The focus of many social psychologists,
the
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 way that
children
 are shaped from their innate ways of communicating into the somewhat limiting unwritten rules that have been set by society. In
this
 essay, I shall outline some social dissimilarities between
children
 and
adults
 as well as determine whether or not these changes are good. The
first
 distinction that comes to mind is that
children
 do not put so much care
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 the opinions of others. While it may come from the inability to do so, kids often simply do what they please, without having considered the repercussions of their actions.
In contrast
 to
this
, while
adults
 are much more rational and intelligent, many
adults
 today struggle with social anxiety. While some forethought is absolutely necessary, it would be best if people learned to do what makes them happy and not fear the judgement of their surroundings. Another variation is that
children
 are much more fickle and socially inconstant.
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 marriage vows only work in the world of
adults
, where change takes a lot more effort. Adaptability is needed in everyday life and the flexibility that comes
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 youth allows one to make many friends and not
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fend off people with their stubbornness. With all that being said, a balance is needed to marry the positive sides of both extremes. In conclusion, grown-ups are more stubborn and socially considerate than their younger selves. While
this
 certainly has advantages, it
also
 often comes with detriments, which limit everyday life.
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