Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?

Expert sportspersons, Who play sports very well, are nice

persons

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for people, that are growing up, to follow. While I agree that people should learn from them, I believe that they have something we ought not to study. On the one hand, I agree that they are an admirable person, not only excellent but

also

hard-working.

Firstly

, every day, the athlete has to diligently train which can make them tired, bored and hurt.

However

. They are still tolerant of that feeling

instead

of giving up.

For example

, Messi, who is the greatest footballer of all time, has attempted very much to become a person whom everyone in the world knows him. He has exercised sixteen hours a day since he was young.

Secondly

, the sportsperson must live healthily so that make them can recover after difficult practice. They always keep

this

lifestyle in their life,

moreover

, it is important for all athletes.

Finally

, Sportspersons usually cope with criticism because of their terrible performance. It is very difficult to overcome so, for going to succeed, we have to take it beside

our

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ourselves

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.

For instance

, Foden has to

be

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apply

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received

recieved

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received

many bad words and he has trained very much to become an excellent midfielder in the Man City team. On other hand, I believe that some athletes have bad hobbies which are performed in talk,

action

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and action

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. Because of getting much praise., they become superior, even

has

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having

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many incorrect activities and

crime

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crimes

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.

For example

, Ronaldo broke the phone of a child and he

also

sit in court as he evaded taxation. In conclusion, young people should study personality, determined, and industrious from those who play sports except Ronaldo