Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?
Expert sportspersons, Who play sports very well, are nice
persons
for people, that are growing up, to follow. While I agree that people should learn from them, I believe that they have something we ought not to study.
On the one hand, I agree that they are an admirable person, not only excellent but Replace the word
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Firstly
, every day, the athlete has to diligently train which can make them tired, bored and hurt. Linking Words
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. They are still tolerant of that feeling Linking Words
instead
of giving up. Linking Words
For example
, Messi, who is the greatest footballer of all time, has attempted very much to become a person whom everyone in the world knows him. He has exercised sixteen hours a day since he was young. Linking Words
Secondly
, the sportsperson must live healthily so that make them can recover after difficult practice. They always keep Linking Words
this
lifestyle in their life, Linking Words
moreover
, it is important for all athletes. Linking Words
Finally
, Sportspersons usually cope with criticism because of their terrible performance. It is very difficult to overcome so, for going to succeed, we have to take it beside Linking Words
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. Correct pronoun usage
ourselves
For instance
, Foden has to Linking Words
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received
recieved
many bad words and he has trained very much to become an excellent midfielder in the Man City team.
On other hand, I believe that some athletes have bad hobbies which are performed in talk, Correct your spelling
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action
. Because of getting much praise., they become superior, even Correct word choice
and action
has
many incorrect activities and Wrong verb form
having
crime
. Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
For example
, Ronaldo broke the phone of a child and he Linking Words
also
sit in court as he evaded taxation.
In conclusion, young people should study personality, determined, and industrious from those who play sports except RonaldoLinking Words
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